Wednesday, 12 March 2014

Heavy Sweetness Ash-Like Frost: Translations (Chapter 9.5: The Heavenly Empress' Birthday Banquet)


   Double update! I thought it was about time we wrap up the birthday banquet and get the story along haha. I also felt a bit bad as I toggle between Once Promised and Heavy Sweetness - it's like Ah Nian and Xiao Yao, you are the father of two children and you don't want to play favouritism to either! 

  Some answers to queries I have had: 
    (a) The book version has 24 chapters, the ending and epilogues. The internet version does not have the chapters collated yet into 24 chapters and are updated exactly like my updates - there's 68 chapters, the ending and epilogues. We are now at chapter 29 of 68, so slightly more than 1/3 and will soon be at the half-way mark. I'm following the book version posted online for as much as I can, and will be ordering the real book.
   (b) Why are they shocked to see Jin Mi? Jin Mi is the splitting image of her mother, the Flower Goddess, who passed away 4000-5000 years ago. She also infamously hates the Heavenly Emperor and the Heavenly Realms so it would be pretty much impossible for her to attend the Heavenly Empress' Birthday Banquet.


Chapter 9.5: The Heavenly Empress' Birthday Banquet (Part 5 of 5)


   "It's so tiring to speak while standing up, " The Moon God moved forward and whispered towards the Heavenly Emperor and Heavenly Empress, "Sister-in-law's heart in finding a wife for Phoenix, I can also understand, but this lady has a thin skin, one must speak carefully, understand?"


  Not caring about the strange looks on the Heavenly Emperor and Heavenly Empress, the Moon God happily pulled me towards the seat between Phoenix and Night to sit.

  Since I can finally sit down again, I was happy and smiled as I sat comfortably, I smiled at Phoenix, then smiled at Night.

  After this round of smiles, I felt that the surrounding was not right, minus the concerned and suspicious glances from the Heavenly Emperor, Heavenly Empress and Water God, all the male gods were looking at me as if they were intoxicated, while the female gods were looking at me angrily until I felt that I had thorns all over my body. Phoenix coldly gave a huff and waved his sleeve, while Night placed his tea cup on the table.

   "May all the gods not be too polite, today I have prepared wine and dishes, may everyone fully enjoy them," The Heavenly Empress said pleasantly and broke the strange atmosphere in the palace.

  Someone graciously lifted up a wine cup to the Heavenly Empress, "The bird tribe wishes the Heavenly Empress a long and prosperous life!" All the bird gods raised their cups towards the Heavenly Empress. The peacock goddess waved her hands and two brilliant five-coloured birds flew from outside the palace and flew one round around the palace peak - all the wooden birds from the carvings immediately came to life, and danced with the five-coloured birds. In one moment, the palace hall was filled with vigour and life. The five coloured birds then stretched their wings and flew towards the front of the Heavenly Emperor and Heavenly Empress, something fell from their beaks, it was a couplet.

    The peacock goddess elegantly read out the couplet.*

     "Good, good, good. Truly a filial girl!" The Heavenly Empress nodded her head and was extremely satisfied. She turned to the Heavenly Emperor and said, "No wonder in the mortal world, they all say daughters are close to the heart, I think this is very true. If Phoenix is half of Sui He, I will be content."

   The Heavenly Emperor nodded his head in agreement, but his heart did not seem to be in it.

   The Heavenly Empress turned again to the peacock goddess and said, "Sui He, you must come to the Heavenly Realms more often, we were after all once from the same tribe."

  The peacock goddess closed her hands obediently in a gesture to indicate "yes".

   "You must not have seen Phoenix in a while," The Heavenly Empress looked at where the peacock goddess was sitting, "We are one family but you sit so far, it seems too distant, why don't you sit next to Phoenix? It will be more convenient for me to talk to you as well."

   "Yes," The peacock goddess drank the wine she used to praise the Heavenly Empress and thereafter elegantly sat next to Phoenix. I admired her from behind Phoenix's head and thought, not bad not bad.

   After all these to-ing and fro-ing, my stomach was hungry, and so I turned all my attention to the food in front of me.

  The peacock goddess was true to the Heavenly Empress' wishes and turned to speak to Phoenix in a low voice, Phoenix would also reply her every few sentences.

   "Your Majesty, look at Phoenix and Sui He sitting over there, don't they look like the people in the painting in my room? The summer rain falling down, a loving couple under the umbrella. I still remember the name of the painting, it's called "Zhu Lian He Bi (Excellent Combination)**". I was eating happily but hearing this from the Heavenly Empress, I slowly stopped.




    Peacock goddess' face reddened and she said coquettishly, "Auntie is teasing Sui He."

    Phoenix furrowed his brow, his sharp nose bridge scrunched up a little to show wrinkles.

    Zhu Lian He Bi? This sounds familiar, I remembered that in the books the Moon God passed me there was a painting called "Zhu Lian He Bi".

  Seeing the peacock goddess' face so red and full of blushing beauty, unless... I turned and asked, "Ah, so the peacock goddess and his Phoenix majesty has mutually cultivated?"

   Phoenix choked, Night paused, Water God surprised, Heavenly Emperor shocked, Heavenly Empress angered, Peacock goddess hurt, the Moon God smiled.

   The entire hall was silent.

    From my sixth sense, .... this was a bad omen.



*The couplet is rather complicated and I rather not translate it since it does not have much relation to the story.
** Zhu Lian He Bi means an excellent combination - the pearls are strung up together with the jade. An excellent person paired with excellent stuff.

Comment: AHAHAH, I love Jin Mi foot in the mouth syndrome.

15 comments:

  1. Thank you so much!! Jin Mi is super hilarious!! I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work ;) Thanks again. Your effort and work is greatly appreciated.

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  2. Thanks for reading! Haha, yes her humour is a breath of fresh air after having my heart broken in Once Promised and Lost You Forever. :)

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  3. Love love love this story, many thanks!

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    1. Hey Jae Tee, thanks for reading :) :) :)

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    2. The thanks and appreciation should come from me! Actually I have been reading your blog and peanuts' as well for more than a year. It's just that I am not very good with computer and apps. I tried to post comments several times but failed. Finally succeeded today, so I'm happy to let you know that I love your translation works!

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    3. Awww thanks for reading my blog for so long! I just started it in December last year haha. :) I've gotten lots of feedback that blogger is horrible to comment on, and peanuts keeps trying to convert me to wordpress, but I have used blogger since I was 16? So happy to hear from you :)

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    4. I don't know why I am having difficulty posting this reply. This is my fourth try. Anyway, I wanted to say that I have read everything that you have posted several times over already, so it seems like you have been blogging for a long long time. Oh yes, I forgot that you took over Xiaoyuer's translation of Heavy Sweetness, Ash-like Frost. Many thanks to her too! I love Jin Mi and Phoenix!

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    5. Oh no! Maybe it's the browser? I usually use google chrome :). Thanks for posting several times heehee. Thanks also for reading the entries several times. I will try to post much more heheh! Ah, I see you are a Phoenix shipper :)

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    6. Yes! I prefer Phoenix to Night. Phoenix is HOT!! He is always so jealous while Jin Mi is such a klutz...

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    7. Hahahah! Phoenix=fire. Ok, I think maybe after chapter 10 or 11, I need to have a poll on who is on Phoenix and who is on Night's ship!

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  4. Thanks for the update!!! Jin Mi is hilarious, luv this girl!!

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    1. Thanks for reading! Hahaha. I suspect readers want to hug and kick her at the same time.

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  5. thanks for the update, decembi!!! as always, love your work!

    I love Jin Mi! Her foot in mouth syndrome and clueless actions really make for fun for us readers even if it causes trouble for those around her even if she doesn't mean any deliberate harm. :D

    As for the ebook version, the one I have ends at 70 chapters (not 72) + the epilogues, but seems to follow religiously to your translations. Hence: "凭我的第一、二、三、四、五、六感,这是个凶兆" ends at chapter 28 and matches your translations about Jin Mi's sixth sense sensing a bad omen.

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    1. Aww thank you for reading :)!!! I always appreciate hearing from your readers.

      Her foot in the mouth help jostles the actions along a lot too! I think she's adorable haha.

      Oh, it could be 70 chapters since I took 72 from jwxc but sometimes a chapter is just the author's note to readers. The less chapters, the less for me to translate before I complete! Yay. Also, I noticed the internet version has slight variations from the book version - the book version just says sixth sense, but the internet one has "one, two, three, four, five, six senses". Actually, the internet one sounds funnier? But i decided to follow the book one. Sometimes, I edit between the two, but sometimes I just follow the book one! Haha or I will never finish!

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  6. @decembi-hope am nt too late venturing your blog :) n Yes!am pheonix's shipper,he's everygirl fantasy man the coldarrogant sexy...uff!da list goes on and on... ;) waiting 4 next update.oh yes!big kisses n hug to you.tanks @decembi

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